Yellow

Colleen Mcmillan   by Colleen McMillan


 

A golden early summer sun shone

from a hard blue sky. It shone on the

paddocks of ripening wheat.

It shone on white teenage lambs

gambling beside staid mothers

still seeking green amid

the browning grasses. It shone

on a flock of white Ibis

thrusting curved black beaks

into soft soil by the dam.

It shone on the yellow Capeweed

flowers crowding around the edges

of paddocks, hiding near posts

and fences away from the farmers hoe.

And it shone on the three little girls,

one dark, one red-gold and

one blonde sitting in their midst,

making daisy chains.

At least, Colleen and Claire

were making daisy chains; carefully

splitting the stem of one picked flower

with a fingernail and inserting

the stem of another flower right up to

the head. Ann watched for a while

even tried for a while, then

her lip dropped. She was too little.

She couldn’t do it.

Her sisters, too intent

on their own activity didn’t notice

until the tears started and

she sobbed, “I can’t, I can’t.”

Partly from affection, partly

from fear of tales being told and

accusations of selfishness

they decked her with bright yellow

necklaces, bracelets and

finally a crown.

Their mother approaching saw three

little girls playing happily. Gleefully

Ann ran towards her

to be first to show her

golden wares.

© Colleen McMillan 2010


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3 Responses to “Yellow”

  1. wendy says:

    I really like that, Colleen. I know nothing about poetry, and can’t write it, but that’s beautiful.
    Wendy

  2. jpnewbury says:

    Hey Colleen
    A gold medal for the beautiful Yellow.
    John

  3. RodTinniswood says:

    Hi Colleen

    I enjoyed reading your piece.

    I loved the imagery of the sunshine on the farm.
    And I loved the story of the 3 little girls – sad and happy and sensitive.

    I can’t help thinking that you might have 2 pieces in one: a poem and a short story. Both could stand on their own.

    Just an idea :)

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